One Knight in Brooklyn — Six Sentence Sunday


This  Six is from my upcoming release with Decadent Publishing’s 1NS series , One Knight in Brooklyn.

In this snippet, Mare has just seen her 1-Night Stand, Robert, for the first time.

Perfectly proportioned, he was fitted to her precise specifications.  Mare’s gaze flitted to his crotch. Though covered by the tunic, enough of a bulge pressed against the gauzy fabric to assure her of the fulfillment of even that desire.  This man wasn’t a knight; he was a god.  Strong.  Magnificent…

And then her paradigm shifted as something unfortunate happened – he spoke.

 

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30 responses

  1. I absolutely LOVE the last line. And what comes after is even better! Great six. Congrats on One Knight!

    July 31, 2011 at 5:06 am

    • Thanks, Jenna. Glad you like the story.

      July 31, 2011 at 3:06 pm

  2. Jennifer Lowery~Writer

    This had me rolling in laughter! Great last line! Thanks for sharing. Congrats on One Knight.

    July 31, 2011 at 1:23 pm

    • I love to cause the giggles. Thanks, Jen.

      July 31, 2011 at 3:07 pm

  3. Fricken awesome xxx and I adore the title and cover! Another 1NS on my to-read list…that series is going to have my new Nook busting at the seams hehe

    July 31, 2011 at 2:10 pm

    • Thanks so much JoAnne. The 1NS series is IMO the best Sexy Shorts out there and I hope OKIB does them proud.

      July 31, 2011 at 3:13 pm

  4. Awesome! I went from being hot to laughing. Great job.

    July 31, 2011 at 2:17 pm

    • It makes me smile to make you laugh…and other stuff. I know that’s soooo wrong. LOL

      July 31, 2011 at 3:16 pm

  5. Lia Davis

    Great six! Congrats again on One Knight.

    July 31, 2011 at 2:27 pm

  6. Aw. reality bites…Stay in the forest at least for a while..:) A very entertaining 6

    July 31, 2011 at 2:33 pm

    • Thanks, Betty. Yes- poor Mare is having her Cinderella castle images go up in flames.

      July 31, 2011 at 3:18 pm

  7. I’m dying to find out. Great six sentence from your former Manhattanite.

    July 31, 2011 at 2:38 pm

    • Thanks, Ray. I am actually from Dallas, but I have always loved that east coast machismo.

      July 31, 2011 at 3:19 pm

  8. Well, wasn’t that just rude! I want to know what happened AFTER he spoke! lol

    Fantastic six!

    Huggles,
    Gracen

    July 31, 2011 at 3:08 pm

    • Thanks, little MIstress of the Dark. Glad you stopped by.

      July 31, 2011 at 3:21 pm

  9. wow! this sounds like a fantastic story! I just got a 1NS accepted myself!
    cheers
    Liz

    July 31, 2011 at 3:11 pm

  10. Congrats, Liz. Can’t wait to see your cover and read about it. Thanks for stopping by.

    July 31, 2011 at 3:20 pm

  11. That was a great last line, there are so many directions you can go now with that cliff-hanger ending. Cool, I like your style.

    July 31, 2011 at 3:33 pm

    • Thanks, Benjamin. I’m pretty pumped up that you think I have a style. LOL

      July 31, 2011 at 3:49 pm

  12. Yum! Great six!! 😉

    July 31, 2011 at 3:43 pm

  13. Great six! Congrats!

    July 31, 2011 at 4:18 pm

  14. One of my favorites parts fo OKIB! How many times in life have we had something simliar happen? Lol, this kind of instance doesn’t even have to contain a cute guy to ring true.

    July 31, 2011 at 4:56 pm

    • It is my favorite line LIsa and was the inspiration for the story. It was the first line in my head.

      July 31, 2011 at 5:15 pm

  15. D'Ann

    LOVE it!

    July 31, 2011 at 5:00 pm

    • Thanks for taking a look, DAnn.

      July 31, 2011 at 5:19 pm

  16. Stacey Kennedy

    This line is so fantastic!! “This man wasn’t a knight; he was a god.”

    August 1, 2011 at 12:47 am

  17. A very enticing excerpt. I look forward to reading more, and I love the cover!

    August 1, 2011 at 12:53 am

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