Pinocchio Syndrome – Six Sentence Sunday


This week’s six again comes from Pinocchio Syndrome, currently available at all major e-book retailers.  Chio, the newest wiseguy in Geppie’s organization has been given the assignment of protecting his daughter so the old man can keep tabs on the girl. Geppie is about to make certain Chio has no designs on his daughter.

“You heard me. Drop your pants.” The old man pinned Chio with his gaze.

What the fuck? Swallowing hard, he unzipped his pants, and pulled out his dick. He prayed to the Virgin Mary there was no pink lipstick on it.

Geppie opened his drawer, pulled out a meat cleaver and laid it on the desk.

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33 responses

  1. Sherry Gloag

    Wow! – Great 6

    August 14, 2011 at 9:30 am

  2. That Chio! LOL Looks like his dick may really be in the wrong place at the wrong time! Was there any pink lipstick remaining? Love this story, Casea!

    August 14, 2011 at 12:59 pm

  3. Jennifer Lowery~Writer

    LOL! I really need to get reading this story! I’m putting it next on my list! Great six!

    August 14, 2011 at 1:52 pm

  4. Oh, yikes.Run!

    August 14, 2011 at 2:37 pm

  5. gayleramage

    Ha Ha, brilliant snippet! I remember this story from last time 😀

    August 14, 2011 at 2:59 pm

  6. Whoa! He means business! Love the playful cover, by the way! Great six!

    August 14, 2011 at 3:52 pm

  7. I have to forward this one this anonymously to my ex-husband. He could have used the meat cleaver treatment. 😉

    August 14, 2011 at 3:58 pm

    • Summer, there are alot of guys who could use the “meat cleaver treatment”. The threat of dismemberment is a good deterrent, I think. LOL Is it wrong to think that?

      August 14, 2011 at 5:56 pm

  8. Lia Davis

    Oh No! lol. Great six.

    August 14, 2011 at 4:21 pm

  9. LOL…LOL, freaking love this six.
    And also love the pretty blue of your site!

    August 14, 2011 at 4:21 pm

  10. love a daddy who’s willing to scare the boys off
    nice one!
    Liz

    August 14, 2011 at 4:31 pm

  11. I love the part about the pink lipstick and cringed on the meat cleaver. Great six! Loved it!

    August 14, 2011 at 4:38 pm

  12. Love the panic over pink and cringed at the cleaver

    August 14, 2011 at 5:09 pm

  13. All I can say is “wow” and sit open mouthed, stifling giggles. Love the powerful visuals!

    August 14, 2011 at 5:37 pm

  14. OMG! My heart stopped then. WTF!

    Awesome six.

    August 14, 2011 at 5:38 pm

  15. adrianakraft

    Whoa!! What in the world is going to happen next? Way to leave us – erm, him – hanging!

    August 14, 2011 at 5:46 pm

  16. Monica Enderle Pierce

    ROFL! I don’t know what’s better, the lipstick or the cleaver. Clearly, Daddy knows the men who work for him and how to effectively communicate.

    August 14, 2011 at 5:50 pm

  17. This story has taken a turn with the meat cleaver. I would not want to see what happens next if I was him.

    August 14, 2011 at 5:53 pm

  18. Oh gawd – I thought is was bad when my dad took my first date out to the back porch to show him his antique sword collection *gulp*

    August 14, 2011 at 6:00 pm

  19. Excellent six!

    August 14, 2011 at 6:05 pm

  20. OMG – That’s good.

    August 14, 2011 at 6:07 pm

  21. Love these six and their humor!

    August 14, 2011 at 6:08 pm

  22. Great six – loved his inner thoughts and then the cleaver at the end – ouch!

    August 14, 2011 at 7:42 pm

  23. That scene is hilarious! Well… maybe not so funny for Chio. Your six sentences definitely made me want to read more.

    August 14, 2011 at 9:36 pm

  24. Toni Kelly

    Hot damn, what a snippet, lol. I’d imagine sweat drops follow in the next few sentences. Thanks for sharing!

    August 14, 2011 at 10:27 pm

  25. Well, if that doesn’t work, I’m not sure what will! Great job!

    August 14, 2011 at 11:10 pm

  26. OMG- NO way!!!! WHat intensity in the scene- great six

    August 14, 2011 at 11:14 pm

  27. Why do I feel a Lorena Bobbit moment coming on? Great six!

    August 15, 2011 at 12:06 am

  28. mirriamsmyth

    OMG I’m scared FOR Chio! Awesome six!

    August 15, 2011 at 4:57 am

  29. This is such a great story! Loving your Six’s! 🙂

    August 15, 2011 at 9:07 am

  30. Whoa! now that would get my attention!

    August 15, 2011 at 3:07 pm

  31. Wow, brilliant snippet, well done 🙂

    August 15, 2011 at 4:25 pm

  32. (dies) Awesome six!

    August 17, 2011 at 5:30 pm

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